Daring Feeling

29 Mar

i feel like flying

yet crying and going insane

i feel so happy

that my tears are starting to drain

I’m living a dream that i only knew in my fantasies

i wrote .. sang .. danced upon it’s melody

wished yearned for the inner serenity..

i feel so alive and yet my coffin is prepared

i feel so loved yet my wounds are so bared..

i hate that i love the feeling

… yet..

i adore the intensity of the feeling..

i dare you my heart ..

i dare you to pull it together and never to fall apart..

i dare you my soul ,

to live like a zombie ,

like a summer leaf falling from an apple tree..

i dare you my mind to go numb on me..

and strain away ..and never see you again..

i dare my self to be anyone but me..if it ended up..

not like i dreamt or felt..


2 Responses to “Daring Feeling”

  1. Knee 02/05/2009 at 11:38 PM #

    I love this :) I actually loved the last lines the most, they held very good metaphors..well done girl =)
    Write on~

  2. Cinderella 03/05/2009 at 9:24 AM #

    really? :D thank u so much Knee , i write what i feel .. and am glad that how i feel come out in metaphor :D

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